Here are my comps so far....
Tuesday, March 27, 2012
Thursday, March 22, 2012
Design Notes for Final 2 Comps.
Elements we liked:
Strong Minds, Strong Faith-More active
Different images/ separation of color
All compositions have to be consistent!!
Things on cover:
Strong minds, Strong Faith
URI
Toledo Christian Schools (logo as well)
Barcode
Address/Phone Number
No elements of letters on the side
Church cross on the back
Monday, March 19, 2012
File Organization
All Important Files have been copied over to the external HardDrive. TCS Footage has been converted and will begin labeling and sub-clipping to begin compiling the final video.
Wednesday, March 14, 2012
Notes from last weeks critique..
Film:
Follow through in the shots. Complete the actions.
- cutting the ribbon, show them standing after
- basketball shooting, continue with the shot
- mayor, etc (This is dates the film though.)
Show group of young kids raising hands, tutoring, awards, cap and gown, academics- classrooms.
Show more smiling. The conversations are working.
Topics-
Faith- not all athletics, show mass, praying, a variety of ages.
Community- Student groups, TC cares, Ribbon shot
Friendship- Variety of ages
Creativity- Band shot was too dark. Skit shot was too bright in background. Avoid shots with windows in the back.
ADD- Student teacher interactions
- class rooms- to show sizes...
Ideas-
Academics- elementary > solving problems on boards
Group of young kids raising hands
Tutoring
Awards
Quiz Bowl
Awards ceremonies
excitement about good grades
competition
LOOK UP @ students not down.
Design:
1st example- Good. Heavy on athletics. Show full image of holding hands- less backsides. No year.
2nd example- No
3rd example- Cool Idea, lacks heirarchy, dont break logo
4th example- Logo with images position?
5th example- Right side is good and interesting, image of hands is bad, left side is strange.
6th example- good images.
DONT BREAK UP LOGO!!!
Find out what TCS wants on the cover.
Have consistent content on examples.
Follow through in the shots. Complete the actions.
- cutting the ribbon, show them standing after
- basketball shooting, continue with the shot
- mayor, etc (This is dates the film though.)
Show group of young kids raising hands, tutoring, awards, cap and gown, academics- classrooms.
Show more smiling. The conversations are working.
Topics-
Faith- not all athletics, show mass, praying, a variety of ages.
Community- Student groups, TC cares, Ribbon shot
Friendship- Variety of ages
Creativity- Band shot was too dark. Skit shot was too bright in background. Avoid shots with windows in the back.
ADD- Student teacher interactions
- class rooms- to show sizes...
Ideas-
Academics- elementary > solving problems on boards
Group of young kids raising hands
Tutoring
Awards
Quiz Bowl
Awards ceremonies
excitement about good grades
competition
LOOK UP @ students not down.
Design:
1st example- Good. Heavy on athletics. Show full image of holding hands- less backsides. No year.
2nd example- No
3rd example- Cool Idea, lacks heirarchy, dont break logo
4th example- Logo with images position?
5th example- Right side is good and interesting, image of hands is bad, left side is strange.
6th example- good images.
DONT BREAK UP LOGO!!!
Find out what TCS wants on the cover.
Have consistent content on examples.
Tuesday, March 13, 2012
Progress Notes
Brainstorm out:
Academic Excellence
Community
Friendship
Arts
Faith
^These need to be expanded to see all the elements. This will help with the video aspect so we don't miss anything.
The concept/storyboard needs fleshed out completely for client interview.
Have 3 solid comps by next Thursday!
Sunday, March 11, 2012
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