Notes from last weeks critique..

Film:
Follow through in the shots. Complete the actions.
- cutting the ribbon, show them standing after
- basketball shooting, continue with the shot
- mayor, etc (This is dates the film though.)

Show group of young kids raising hands, tutoring, awards, cap and gown, academics- classrooms.

Show more smiling. The conversations are working.

Topics-
Faith- not all athletics, show mass, praying, a variety of ages.

Community- Student groups, TC cares, Ribbon shot

Friendship- Variety of ages

Creativity- Band shot was too dark. Skit shot was too bright in background. Avoid shots with windows in the back.

ADD- Student teacher interactions
        - class rooms- to show sizes...

Ideas-
Academics- elementary > solving problems on boards
Group of young kids raising hands
Tutoring
Awards
Quiz Bowl
Awards ceremonies
excitement about good grades
competition

LOOK UP @ students not down.


Design:
1st example- Good. Heavy on athletics. Show full image of holding hands- less backsides. No year.
2nd example- No
3rd example- Cool Idea, lacks heirarchy, dont break logo
4th example- Logo with images position?
5th example- Right side is good and interesting, image of hands is bad, left side is strange.
6th example- good images.



DONT BREAK UP LOGO!!!

Find out what TCS wants on the cover.
Have consistent content on examples.